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The Land of Chocolate

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The Land Chocolate

MiMi sighed as she tapped her pencil on the table. Why did math have to be so boring? It was so pointless and there was so many numbers, it got confusing. She glanced at the clock; it was even too early to go to bed! Groaning, she leaned back in her chair. If only she had something interesting to do besides silly homework. She was thinking of an old story her Grandmama once told her.

"A long time ago, there was a kindly old witch who loved to make sweets for all the little boys and girls. So she made a place that all the children could go to if they were got scared, sad or even bored. It was a magical place with cocoa waterfalls, marshmallow clouds and graham cracker trees. If anyone ever wanted to go to this magical land of chocolate, all you had to do was snap three times and then say, ‘I love chocolate more than anything!"

That story always managed to make MiMi smile. She could see the land of chocolate so clearly. She pictured tree trunks of peppermint, the geyser that shot cherry cola, and the huge mountains of ice cream. What a dream it would be to visit such a wonderful place. She closed her eyes, dreaming of the sweet wonders. Then, she snapped her fingers three times and shouted, “I love chocolate more than anything!”

Once she said that, MiMi felt the earth beneath her shake. She stood up from her chair and watched as her whole room shuddered. Slowly, her walls began to melt away. Sniffing the air, MiMi would smell the familiar scent of chocolate. One by one the floorboards disappeared, revealing soft, green grass. As the walls finally disappeared, MiMi found herself starring at the magical land from her Grandmama’s stories.

The land of chocolate.

"It's real?" MiMi asked herself in disbelief. "It's real! C'est incroyable!! So this isn’t grass…its watermelon taffy!”

MiMi got down on her knees and grabbed a handful of grass. Sure enough, instead of grass she found her hands full of taffy! She stuffed a few pieces into her mouth and chewed. It was so utterly sweet! As she chewed the pieces in her mouth, MiMi grabbed a few more handfuls and stuffed the taffy into her pockets. As good as the taffy was, she wanted to look around and try to remember what everything tasted like.

She walked a few ways until she came upon some rocks. Thinking back, she remembered what Grandmama had told her.

“Rock candy!” MiMi exclaimed as she ran over to one of the rocks. “This one looks like its lemon flavored!”

MiMi gave it a lick and was rewarded with the taste of lemons. So she sat down on the ground and sucked at the large piece of candy. She couldn't believe her luck; a hunk of rock candy just for her!  She slurped, sucked and bit until the rock slowly began to shrink. She managed to pull off a few crystals to stuff into her pocket.

“Granny will never believe this!” MiMi thought. “I’ve found the land of chocolate and it’s amazing!”

The rock disappeared but MiMi didn't fret. She knew there was more to be seen! She stood up and headed to find more.

It wasn’t long before she came to what looked like bushes.  But MiMi knew better for as she got closer, she saw they were in fact cupcakes bunched together. She sat herself down in front of the cupcake bush. She grabbed a cupcake and bit into it.

“Oh, this one is red velvet, my favorite!” She asked. “And the icing is cherry flavored!”

The cupcake disappeared soon. The young lady licked her fingers before picking up another one.

“Chocolate with lime icing? Different but tasty!” She devoured it. “C'est merveilleux!!”

MiMi grabbed at the cupcake buds, stuffing one after another into her mouth. She hide a few in her pockets for later.  Soon, the bush was bare.  Still, MiMi was not worried because she knew she would find more.  The only problem she had was standing back up.  Her stomach had gotten a bit bigger but she managed to stand.

“Oh, I feel slightly bloated,” MiMi patted her stomach.  “But..I'm still hungry.  I wonder else there is?"

MiMi munched on some of her taffy before she came upon a tree.  She looked up to see apples but they weren't normal apples.

“Candy apples!” She reached up.  “Oh, I can't reach them!”

The tree, apparently hearing her plea, suddenly dropped an apple into her hand.  Gleefully, MiMi took a bite out of the apple.  The tree, glad that the girl was enjoying it's fruit, dropped another apple.  MiMi finished off her first apple before eating the other.  This continued until the tree was bare. Thankfully, MiMi managed to stuff two apples in her pockets for later

“Those were yummy! Thank you tree,” MiMi patted the tree.  “I wonder where I should go next?”

The tree poked her with a branch and then pointed towards two more trees.  They also had apples but one was caramel and the other was chocolate.  MiMi smiled as she stood up, wobbling slightly.

“Oh!” She looked at her stomach.  “I've gotten bigger.  Strange, I'm still hungry.  I'm going to eat more.”

MiMi managed to get to the second tree, her belly bouncing slightly.  It wasn't huge but it certainly was bigger than before.  But she really didn't care because she was till hungry.  She she sat down under the caramel apple tree.  Like the other one, it dropped apples to her until it too was naked.  Once more, she got up but she found it was getting harder.  She looked down and saw that her stomach had doubled in size.

“Wow, I didn't think I could get any bigger.” She said.  

The last tree did the same as the others.  As MiMi ate, her stomach got bigger.  Not only that, her breasts were getting bigger. Her top stretched, making room for her larger boobs.  Even her bottom was growing.  It wasn't until she was done with the chocolate covered apples did she notice.  Grunting, MiMi stood up and inspected herself.

“Oh, look at how large I've become!” MiMi giggled.  “I wonder how long my clothes will last.  I should finish up here.”

MiMi waddled away from the small forest.  She munched on her save goodies until she reached a large garden.  MiMi saw more cupcake bushes as well as other bushes with flowers.  She picked up a rose and took a bite out of it.

“Oh, it tastes like cherries!” She chewed.  “Délicieux!”

Once more, she sat herself down and ate.  The bush was completely edible with taffy leaves and chocolate thorns. Grabbing up all the flowers, MiMi made a meal out of a bouquet. The bush was soon bare and MiMi was ready to go on to find more food.

“I'm thirsty,” She said suddenly. “I wonder if there is anything to drink.”

MiMi walked a while until she heard trickling. She moved towards the sound to find a large waterfall.  Well, it looked like a waterfall except for the fact that it was brown instead of clear.  Instead, she moved closer to the pond and the falls. She saw some reeds in the shape of straws and she picked one up. Placing it in the liquid, she sipped it up.

“Oh, it's root beer!” MiMi exclaimed.

MiMi smiled and continued to drink.  She had eaten so much she was dying of thirst.  She chugged down the sweet, frothy beverage as fast she could.  Whilst she drank, her stomach continued to expand.  Her body was growing her stomach was so far the biggest part of her. She had already ripped her shirt and the huge gut was free from clothing.

About thirty minutes passed.  Finally, MiMi stopped drinking.  She released a huge, satisfied burp.

“That was the best root beer I've ever had!” The wobbly girl said.  “Hm.  Wonder what I should do now?  I should head back and finish my math homework.”

“Don't leave!”

MiMi turned around to see a small gingerbread man running towards her.  The little man had a chef's hat on and was holding a plate of warm, chocolate chip cookies.

“You haven't had any cookies yet!” He said.

“Oh, hello!” MiMi waved at him. “Who are you?”

“I'm the head cook of Chocolate Land!  Please don't leave yet! You must have some cookies!”

“They smell good but I have homework I must finish.”

“If you eat some cookies, I'll give you the chocolate key!” The chef said.  “If I give it to you, you'll be able to come home.  You'll also be able to come back too Chocolate Land.”

“I can come back! Je vous remercie!” MiMi clapped her hands.  “Okay, I'll have some cookies!”

The chef smiled and offered up the plate.  MiMi immediately devoured them.

“Oh, you are a fantastique chef! Do you have anymore?”

“I do at my village.  Won't you please visit?”

“Bien sûr!”

So MiMi managed to follow the little gingerbread man to his village.  By this time, her breasts were ready to break out of her shirt and her skirt was ready to rip.  But she didn't care because she wanted more cookies.

They entered the little cookie town.  The gingerbread people all waved at her, apparently happy to see her. She returned the ways, smiling.  The Head Cook brought her over to a table covered with various cookies.  MiMi sat at the head of the table, a huge smile on her face. The little gingerbread people were so cute and the cookies they had baked looked delicious.

So MiMi ate the cookies placed before her.  She ate snickerdoodles, sugar cookies, chocolate chip and more. The plates piled up and she devoured each cookie placed before her.

She had finally finished the last cookie. MiMi ate it and then burped happyliy.

“Oh, thank you so much! Those cookies were merveilleux!” MiMi smiled. “Thank you little gingerbread people.”

“Please come back.” The small gingerbread cook begged as he handed MiMi the key.

“I will! Bye bye!” MiMi waved good bye.

Once MiMi took the key, a huge door appeared.  With some difficulty, she managed to place the door in the lock. It opened, stretching wider so it could accommodate MiMi's girth.  She waddled through it, finding herself back in her room.

“Oh, looks like I can't reach my desk,” MiMi said as she looked at her homework. “Maybe I can use my belly as a desk.”
A story featuring my girl, MiMi. She seems really popular and I feel like I need to write more original stuff. Enjoy and tell me what you think!
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Brubake's avatar
Wow this was delicious. She ate a lot, i was expecting MiMi's huge overstuffed belly to burst apart her desk big time. This because only her imagination left the classroom but transported all she ate at the Land of Chocolate into her little belly. Your ending is better because of all the details, & she didn't get in trouble for destroying school property or hurting some kids!