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Daphne and MiMi's Beach Pinic

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Daphne and MiMi's Beach Picnic

"It's so cool to finally meet you Daphne!" MiMi said as she set down the blanket.  

"I know!" Daphne smiled.  "I've been wanting to meet you for ages!  I've never met anyone from the Food Lover's website before."

"Me too!" MiMi sat down.  "This is going to be fun!"

Daphne sat down too and pulled out one of the picnic baskets.  Opening it up, she began to bring out the first course.  She was extremely excited about this picnic with MiMi.  The two of them were online friends from a site that was made up of people who loved to eat.  Daphne had been on the site for a few months when she stumbled upon MiMi's page.  After exchanging stories, the two of them decided it was time to meet.

From the first basket, Daphne removed a wonderful spread of starters.  There were mozzarella sticks, garlic bread, macaroni, chicken tenders, okra, potato skins and more. MiMi's eyes were wide with excitement.  This was going to be fantastic! She wished she could do these things with her friends but they were never interested.

"Care for some Fanta?" Daphne handed MiMi a can of orange soda.  "I remembered it was your favorite."

"Thanks!" MiMi took the soda.  "Man, this all looks great!"

"You think so?" Daphne picked up a plate.  "Well, I know a lot about food.  I'm such a fatty!"

"What? No you're not!" MiMi said.  "If anyone is a fatty, it's me."

"Don't say that!" Daphne smiled.  "Lets not get depressed.  Lets eat!"

"Okay!"

MiMi grabbed a plate and began to fill it up.  Daphne followed suit, piling it high with mashed potatoes, pasta salad, nachos and pasta. MiMi placed her plate to the side and reached into the basket. She pulled out a huge liter of root beer along with two mugs. She poured a drink for her and her friend. They clinked their mugs together before downing the fizzy drink.

"So you're still in school right?" Daphne asked as she tore into a chicken leg.

"Yeah. I'll be graduating soon along with my two best friends, Yvette and Gwen." MiMi said through a mouthful of noodles.

"Really? What do you think you're going to study?"

"I'm not sure, let me think about that for a second."

While MiMi though, Daphne ate.  She soon cleaned the meat off the bone and grabbed another leg. Her stomach gurgled as it inched forward. She poured herself some more root beer and took a long swing of it.

"I might study cooking," MiMi said.  "My granny taught me a lot of cooking. She used to own a bakery."

"Is that why you love food so much?" Daphne asked.

"Probably." MiMi smiled.

MiMi stuffed the remaining noodles into her mouth and swallowed. She gave a dainty burp before getting herself a second helping. Daphne had already demolished five chicken tenders and was already on her sixth.  The two girls were slowly devouring all of their starters, barely stopping for a breath.  Surely, it was clear that the two of them had a lot in common.

"Gosh, who created mozzarella sticks?" Daphne asked as she ate one.  "They're so bad for you but they taste so good!"

"I know right?" MiMi popped two into her mouth.  "I wish my friends were this interested in food."

"They aren't huh?" Daphne took a spoonful macaroni to the mouth.

"No and they're always telling me that I shouldn't eat to much," MiMi rolled her eyes as she crammed some potato skins into her mouth.  "Like it matters!"

"I agree," Daphne burped and ate a big slice of garlic bed.  "Besides, we only live once!"

"I'll drink to that!" MiMi lifted up her glass.

Daphne smiled and the cheered.

It wasn't too long before the appetizers were gone.  Both girls had now adopted nice, round bellies. But being such foodies, the girls weren't done yet.  They reached back into their baskets to bring out the main course.  Daphne had brought a large fried chicken along with a plate of shrimp, some lamb chops and a hug pot of spaghetti.  MiMi pulled out a large, deep dish pizza, snow crab legs, steak cuts and some pork cutlets from her basket.

"Did you bring the burgers?" Daphne took out a mini grill.

"I sure did!" MiMi pulled out some round patties.  "You've got to have burgers at picnic! I also brought a huge bowl of mashed potatoes too."

"Smart girl."

The two ladies refilled their glasses and piled their plates high with food.

"So do you have anyone special in your life MiMi?" Daphne asked as she threw some shrimp into her mouth.

"Not really," MiMi said as she stuffed some spaghetti into her mouth. "Guys are weird.  I feel like they don't know what they want."

"That's guys for you," Daphne grabbed a lamb chop and bit into the meat.  "Even when you get older, it doesn't get easier."

"Really?" MiMi burped before cramming a burger into her maw.

"Hey, relationships are hard in general," Daphne continued as she munched on some pizza.  "There was one time when----"

As Daphne regaled in her past, both girls guts were reaching epic proportions.  MiMi's stomach, round and large, was about to rip her striped sundress while Daphne's belt had snapped off.  Both ladies, however, didn't really care and continued their epic meal.  Both guts wobbled, stretched and grew as the two ladies gorged themselves like mad. And it wasn't long before the food disappeared again.

"BARP!" MiMi sloshed about.  "Man, those burgers were great."

"I know!" Daphne grunted as she tried to sit up.  "There's only one course left now."

"Dessert!" MiMi smiled.

One last time, the ladies returned to their never ending baskets of food.  MiMi pulled out chocolate eclairs, two containers of cupcakes, three different cheesecakes and a platter of chocolate chip cookies.  Daphne had brought a four layer cake, two pans of brownies, a plate of fudge and five tubs of ice cream.  It was time for the final meal.

"There is nothing like dessert is there?" Daphne said as she bit into some cheesecake.

"Gosh, I wish I could eat dessert all day!" MiMi sighed, munching on a brownie.

"There is nothing like dessert," Daphne crammed two cupcakes into her mouth.  "Whats your favorite?"

"That's hard!" MiMi bit into a cookie.  "I love pie. Peach pie, key lime, pumpkin, blueberry, cherry, apple."

"With whipped cream?" Daphne asked as she took a bite of cake.

"Oh yes!" MiMi licked her lips and then chewed on some fudge.

"And some chocolate syrup?" Daphne ate some more cake.

"And a cherry on top!"

"With nuts and sprinkles."

"Gosh, you're making me hungry again!" Daphne sighed.

As soon as she spoke, Daphne's dress ripped and her glorious gut wobbled forth.  MiMi's belly followed, ballooning out as it was released.  

"Wow, look at you!" Daphne sounded impressed.  "That's on heck of a gut!"

"Oh this is nothing. I mean yours if fantastic!" MiMi blushed slightly.

"Well it looks like we're out of munchies," Daphne peered into the basket. "But you know I saw a café on the boardwalk."

"And it is getting close to dinner time." MiMi said with a small grin.
I am such a horrible person! This is for the awesome and amazing :iconSkidd33: whom did my part of the trade months ago! I must write him anotherrrrrrrrrrr!

Anyways, this is his character Daphne and my character MiMi getting their munch one.
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Hm...Do you want me to look at it from a writer's perspective or a viewers?

Ah heck I'll look at it from both XD

Writer's perspective(technique): If you want to make characters more interesting, you should tell us a little bit more about them. Of course this piece is mistake free and follows smoothly. As far as technique is concerned you did a decent job, but you could have told us a little more about the characters.

Viewer's Perspective(content): This is an excellent read from start to finish. Everything flows smoothly and as a viewer I can imagine the girl's bellies. Although I would have liked a short description of the girls. Keep up the good work!